Ovn1's 2 cents

Charming!

[Taron]

That is just golden, man! I love the colors, love the attitude, love the style...I may not love her right arm on the hip and the hip may be a bit narrow and low, but the vibe and the glorious face and hair and cute dress make up for it all a thousand fold! Fantastic!

Thanks.
You're fully right Taron, I wasn't happy with arm on hip, hip itself and more
Here is a quick and dirty revised version.

[Taron]

MUCH better already! Such a tough call with that right hand of hers. I do like how you're making her look like a young girl, which is great! Her face feels about 4 to 5 years more mature than her body, I think, but I don't think that's a problem. If you felt funky about it, you could still squeeze her waist line a wee bit up and flare those hips out a bit more, but keep the width of the waist for sure!
The hand, well...it looks like it's angled beyond 90 degree, which is a bit broken, while what's left to be seen of it appears to suggest a much smaller hand than her beautiful left hand. It's really, really tricky, though. Don't think I wouldn't see the perspective in this, I'm fully aware of it, but it's just a little confused. Her lower right arm is also a bit bulkier than the slender left arm.
This kinda stuff can be tweaked till the cows come home, no doubt. But, again, overall this is simply gorgeous!

Nice drawingstyle - very cute lady

That hand is tricky for sure
Glen Keane resolved that using "repentir" strokes, in model: http://keaneart.tumblr.com/post/1238414 ... glen-keane.
I like that "repentir" idea, I'll check how to implement that later

[Taron]

Holy hell, dude, yours is SO MUCH PRETTIER! Amazing!
Well, I think he'd be very impressed and pleased!
Anyway, he understood extremely well what he was doing with that hand, but you have to envision the "anatomy" he was suggesting. You may just need one line that separates the fingers from the volume of the hand to clarify the perspective and posture.

Maybe Ovn1 is Glen Keane incognito who knows ?

Glen Keane and I would know!
But do not flatter me too much ( or make me laugh too much ) as I'm the copycat here!
I love the natural, spontaneous and fresh aspect we can see in Keane's art.
I have just tried to replicate that with Verve! ...because Verve is pure fun and happiness for such doodle

Nice style. I like it